One sentence is good for your personal objective by using the keyword of the position you are applying for. You must use correct grammar.
In my opinion, you should write your personal objective as follows;
Career oriented position as a Finance Assistant in a challenging
organization where I can utilize my qualification, knowledge, skills and
experience to extend my full commitment to the organization.
In my opinion, you should write your personal objective as follows;
Career oriented position as a Finance Assistant in a challenging
organization where I can utilize my qualification, knowledge, skills and
experience to extend my full commitment to the organization.