I Am Seeking A Customer Service Rep Position And Wrote An Objective On My Resume. Can You Help Me To Improve On It? Seeking A Position That Will Further Enhance My Communication, Problem Solving, And Leadership Skills.


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tina harris answered
You can all was go to the library and get you some books on how you do this they will show you the right way to improve your words right. Get a book on improving my communications.skills they should have lots there.I think this will really help you out some. Before you wright that resume..go and see what they have there. That will help you out..
Good luck..
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Anonymous answered
I think your statement has good intent, however some suggestions are as follows: 1) an objective at the beginning of CV or resume should not endeavor to say too much.  Your objective should be 15-18 words or less.
2)  Too many adjectives will reek of over the top marketing; better to simplify and save multiple objectives for your cover letter.
3) Statements of objective are largely being phased out, and instead, a brief summary statement with key words (because nowadays most CVs/resumes are scanned electronically) is preferred by potential employers and job seekers.

A suggestion for revision if you prefer to stay with objective statement:
"Experienced, results-oriented customer service professional seeking to leverage knowledge and expertise in growing organization."

Alternatively, you might consider a very brief summary statement which summarizes your qualifications for the job, and instead rely upon your cover letter to state your objective(s)--(just one example follows, but you might include key words described in a specific posting--remember to keep it brief):
SUMMARY: Senior level, results-oriented customer service representative with multi-industry experience in matrixed organizations

Hope this is helpful, and good luck in your search :)

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